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But with the good always comes the bad
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But with the good always comes the bad |
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UnHolyDestiny New Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 3 |
You brought me into this world with the best intension. But with the good always comes the bad. And yes I was a malfunction. You told me life isn’t always about playing. But with the good always comes the bad. And Yes I wasn’t good at obeying. You told me to be somebody But with the good always comes the bad. And yes I failed without any worry. You told me please do it for me. But with the good always comes the bad And yes I said maybe tomorrow we’ll see As I awaken to the sound of my mom James wake up your father is falling apart A perminission left me numb As I see this vision it is of my father Gasping for air Pressing the button for please help here. As I finally open my eyes and enter the room. He lays there passed away into the heavens groom. “To my father who I as a child never realized how much life is worth and how much it meant to my father. A message to all children who take things for granted. Please realize Make the best of life for yourself, and the ones you love.” |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
My friend's dad is gone and I'm willing to bet this is how she probably feels. For me this just might end up being another thing I feel like crap about in the long run. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
A very emotional first post, UHD! I enjoyed your writing! And being the redundant lover of redundancies myself, the multiple use of the title line was very well done. Thanks for sharing! Oh yeah, and GIS - I think it was the humorous side of the nature of God that allowed us to evolve into the realization that crap makes for good fertilizer...lol Plant those seeds...they will grow. Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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UnHolyDestiny New Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 3 |
Thanks GIS and Purity for your support. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
doesn't crap being good fertilizer add to the poem of with the good comes the bad only in reverse. I read purity's response and thought maybe I should respond again and maybe explain my response so it doesn't sound so rude. I guess I take my parents for granted, but at the same time its hard to get along in the midst of tension. Thats why I said I'd end up feeling like crap in the long run about. Then on top of that I forgot to welcome you to pip. Welcome. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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UnHolyDestiny New Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 3 |
I realize what you said...and Im thankfull cause you cant only look at things from 1 point of view, and I think it was very odd, but at the same time I could very well see your point.  |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
With The Good, There Always Comes The Bad...SO True, Great Read Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy... |
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