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silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-11-07 02:37 AM


is there ever an end
to the haunting years
of loneliness and rejection?
will i ever be needed or wanted
for who i really am?
do i have to pretend
that my life is perfect
for you to take an interest in me?
but oh no.
no interest taken, right?
is it because I'm too bad for you?
not what you are looking for
sure, yeah, i get it.
whatever, don't worry
I'm used to it
don't say sorry
you don't need to apologise
for good taste

thanks mum, for making me think
I was a great person
that people would like me
thanks dad, for reasurring me
about all the boys
that would be at my feet
thanks, but i've grown out of white lies

everyone around me
are so happy
with their lives
i've stopped to bother
about asking why
look at them.
flirting like a sleazy barman
laughing with eyes toying
and luring
would you want that?
want me to be all over you
enjoy a one nighter
and then face the reality of the next day
to find you don't want me
cause i'm too bad for you
not your type
your not interested
sure, yeah, whatever.
don't worry.

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

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vampiana
Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere
1 posted 2004-11-07 02:42 AM


wow..lor..that was so good..and so sad..guys do want you, you're prettier than hundreds of girls!
how can you think that about yourself?
if i was a guy, i'd go out with you in a flash! lol
awesome poem
Love,
Kurst

"I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson

silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-11-07 02:48 AM


but there we go, going back to visual appeal. can't they like me for ME? am i that annoying or boring or what? thats what i mean...

glad u liked it. thanks for the reply.

your the only one keeping me alive

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-11-08 01:13 AM


Nah, you're beautiful. May I quote, Gis here? Beauty is as it does.
Do you remember last year? I knew no one in that class but "Bread." (to protect identity). From day one, I tagged along with you, followed you, wanted nothing more than to be friends with you. I guess it worked. But odd, huh? I was drawn to you by your superb (sorry, had to use it) personality, because only rare people choose friends by looks. I didn't even choose you, I just wanted to be your friend.

Before I dig myself into a bigger hole, I feel the same, always have. But you don't hate yourself, you hate all those others for not likng you. At least, you should love yourself. (The hole keeps getting bigger, there's me for advice!)

Ack! Ack! Alack Jack! It's Back In It's Pack! With Lack Of The Cat!
Weird. Trying to cheer you up. With all due respect to this useless reply, may I say, even sad, this poem was well written and it showed your soul. Mind, body and soul.

Luv u (soz for taking up reply space).
Hollow.
Courtney.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2004-11-08 01:20 AM


Yeah it kinda sux feeling like that, but after you get used to it, it just turns into a bunch of really cool art.  Poetry, music, painting, crafts of sorts,  lol.  And thats kind of nifty to be quoted.  lol.

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

EveGnosis
Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
5 posted 2004-11-08 02:08 AM


and to also quote from aussie teen... your first question was kwite fair dinkum...(honest and genuine).
if they don't like you for who you genuinely are, they don't like you period; they just want something or are just a waste of space...
great write.

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
6 posted 2004-11-08 04:41 AM


Can't Quote Anyone, But Great Write

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

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