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vampiana
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-11-07 01:49 AM


I dispise you.
How dare you flaunt your happiness
in front of me.
Going on about this and that
When you know how
Jealous
It makes me.

I hate how pretty
you are.
I hate how I know
You'll get him.
I want to vomit when
I see,
His beautiful
Arms wrapped around
Your shoulders.

DON'T TOUCH HER!
I want to scream,
but he doesn't know me
I just admire him from afar,
And pretend to you
Like I'm over him.
Like I don't love him
Just as much as you.

And there you are
Flaunting your happiness,
The pictures of him
With his arm around your shoulder,
You looking just as pretty
and radiant as ever.

I dispise you
And I dispise me
For being so petty.
But I don't care,
Just get away from him.

Why must you want him,
Making me feel even more broken
inside.
Just a pathetic nothingness,
Sitting at home, watching dumb movies.
While you're out there,
Dirtying him with your touch.

"I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson

© Copyright 2004 Kirsty - All Rights Reserved
silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-11-07 02:19 AM


Oh kurt........

ouch. oh my. you expressed that so painfully, and oh god it makes it easier to understand. that is one of the worst feelings ever. and admitting to jealousy doesnt make u less jealous! nor does denying it.....

god i loved it.

hu ever this pretty girl is, in the end of the day, shes just that pretty face, and ur way more. But also in the end of the day, u r prettier just unusual! shes prob typical looking chick....

he'll mvoe on and see what hes been missing.

LOR

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

vampiana
Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere
2 posted 2004-11-07 02:23 AM


shes not typical pretty..shes that striking model pretty.
i don't want to be unusual. no one likes stupid "unusual" people.
thanks for the reply anyway

"I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-11-07 02:07 PM


Fluck (cue taken from you lor). Sorry I didn't cast my eyes over this sooner. I feel pathetic, but I guess you feel sort of similar. I feel the same, in a different sort of way (read reply to my poem "Nobody Likes You, Friend" I hate feeling jealous. But I do. Well written, felt the emotion.

Hollow.
Courtney.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

darkness_witch
Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
4 posted 2004-11-07 11:53 PM


good work

everyone wants what they cant have right?

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

EveGnosis
Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
5 posted 2004-11-08 01:59 AM


"she-cat stalking on the wild side..."
you go, girl!
back arched, hairs raised, slant-eyed-pupils widened...
scratch the 'ell outta her...

this was bad to the bone.

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
6 posted 2004-11-08 04:58 AM


Awesome Poem, I Know How It Is To "Want What You Cant Have",It Sucks ...

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

aussie teen
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
7 posted 2004-11-08 06:44 PM


well written kursed...... everyone is beautiful in their own way and it goes for you too.... just because she is model pretty desnt mean she has any personality.... yiou have loads of it... if you didnt you wouldnt be ab;le to write something like this...
keep it coming....
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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