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EveGnosis
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since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA

0 posted 2004-11-06 12:57 PM


blink!
you missed it all.
but hey, it's ok
i sneezed and missed it too.
let's turn around and go back.



i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2004-11-06 01:33 AM


Yeah, I have a feeling I missed quite a bit of it.  I think I will go back and try again.  

-GIS

God blesses.

News_From_Nowhere
Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173
CU, NY
2 posted 2004-11-06 01:41 AM


No greater theme has e'er been said
In such few words.

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm"

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-11-06 02:13 AM


Love it Eve. Love it.

Hollow.
Courtney.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

darkness_witch
Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
4 posted 2004-11-06 04:50 AM


beautiful

wish it was longer so i could experience more

but now I think about it it would never be the same

love it

love and empathy
darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

Purity
Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
5 posted 2004-11-08 12:33 PM


If your poetry is any indication of how you drive, then let's do turn around, for it would be a most scenic route I am sure. But, I gotta take some dramamine, as you are sure to be an intense driver! Make sure to bring some safety pins to fasten my eyelids open so I don't make the mistake of blinking again, and if you're gonna sneeze, if you'll give me warning, I'll take hold of the wheel while you are dead for that brief second lol...(but will be glad you came back).
AWESOME POEM, EVE!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
6 posted 2004-11-08 05:59 AM


Let's.....Great Poem

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

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