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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Its art Quiet inside me Desperate grasp for reality Its just and bright lights High hopes Spill what was a lack of thought Open up this time in space What I can see What I can feel Open what was closed If I'm condemned for this Then so be it Condemn me Let it go like that Smooth and quiet Open this up For me and you I'm a real person A little depressed and excited Just thinking about what I will do Understand this overbearing state of mind Pull it back to clearly see This isn't fantasy Even with a muzzle mouth And here my mind is dragging it will understand Just to forcefully say something And reallize what I actually did Open this can of potential Show it out for you But may you see God blesses. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
this is a good write greeny, but it was a little abstract i wanted to see more like what are you opening up and your overbearing state of mind, you know a few more concrete ideas, but i did enjoy this Awake through motion with curiosity to curtain your first move |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Given how abstract the art of your journey, Craig, it only takes a moment of really looking at this to truly admire its beauty. Do they appreciate abstract art in Seattle? I'm sure they do... Here's to your journey, and tell Elijah I said hello! Great poem from a great poet and person. Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
"it's art" yep. enough said. thanks for the "you learn quickly" comment, but hey, i learn from the best of 'em, huh? u r a freak, greeny. and i mean this in the most sincerely kewl of connotations...hee hee. i don't get the seattle reference, purity, but then again, do any of us truly get any of this? i luv your stuff. write on! i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you everybody eor-Well this is basically like most of my "work" based on present circumstances. I'm going to Seattle (here is your answer eve) on a bus and I don't really know what to expect when I get there, but since I'm no longer a witch and I'm on God's side I'm somewhat comfortable with it. Maybe I could have been a little more abstract with the ideas and words though. purity- I hope they like quiet art and all kinds of art, because I'm going to be selling as much as I can make and doing music. lol. eve- You are an awesome poet. I love everything I've read from you. Its always pretty deep and sometimes I have to read it a few times before I understand it fully, and even then I sometimes have a hard time. Yeah maybe I am a freak. Hopping across the country to a place where I know no one and doing it with a growing sensation of faith in God. Yeah I'm a freak. lol. You guys are awesome. -GIS God blesses. |
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