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silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-11-04 01:28 AM



im sick of it
IM SO DAMN SICK OF IT
this is what i mean by confusion
don't know what to do
don't care what i do
and i don't know what to say
cause your so perfect
you're all so perfect
shut up
i hate you
all
i can't be bothered with the pain anymore
with the effort
i just want to be me
but no, thats not wanted
i need to be someone different to be loved
but what if tomorrow i wasnt here?
would anyone know the real me?
i close my eyes
and try to go numb
numb of these useless feelings
that make me look pathetic
and wasted
and juvenile
and ugly
and unwanted
cause, i'm so unwanted...

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

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vampiana
Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere
1 posted 2004-11-04 01:32 AM


great poem..but you are SOOOOO WANTED! YOU ARE SO VERY WANTED! DON'T EVER EVER EVER THINK DIFFERENT!
lots of love,
Kirsty

"I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-11-04 01:33 AM


"All ****** up
And I don't know how
How I ever got to where I feel
Like I am dying on the inside
I want to be happy
But I don't know how"

Everyones fed up feeling like this. I can tell. I don't know either, I just don't know. But girl, I'm here. We all are. Love you. Mwah! Arrrghhh these poems do something to me.

"Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows, no tomorrow, no tomorrow."

Hollow.
Courtney.

Extra big hugs!

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

aussie teen
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
3 posted 2004-11-04 05:58 AM


well written andd i know thiss tooo well...... well writtenand keep ones lilke this coming.... know that you are wanted, you are needed, you are loved.....
always hold your head high, keep a smile on your face and no one will bring you down... and have a good laugh a at least once each day..... it helps with anything.... it really does....

Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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