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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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0 posted 2004-11-03 10:42 PM



At first I opened my eyes
Then I opened myself

When the opportunity came
I gorged on the sights
And claimed everything for my own
The time of taking

These things I took weren't free
Even though when I saw them they were
Everything I have and had drips and leaks away

I have to plug this hole
The drips keep dripping
My whole keeps dropping
What I have keeps loosing
But what about the keeping

A plug to keep
Put it in this whole
Stop the leaks
Save the freaks

A simple task of containment
Mind-blowing dereignment

Ahhh, the final settlement
Loosen my thoughts
Free my mind

Isn't this just delicious
The jazzy taste of my retaining dish
MMmmM mmm

God blesses.

© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2004-11-03 10:43 PM


I've been praticing a single jazz progression on guitar and I guess its left its mark on my poetry.

-GIS

God blesses.

EveGnosis
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since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
2 posted 2004-11-03 10:48 PM


you cracked me up with your last lines! lol. jazz, eh? nice!!

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2004-11-03 11:03 PM


Yeah jazz.  lol ...dun dunt dun dunt din dint din dint ....  Actually pretty interesting after a few days.  lol

-GIS

God blesses.

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