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click1
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since 2003-03-25
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0 posted 2004-11-02 10:41 PM



This story doesn't have,
a happy ending.

What have we ,
done?

What have we,
become?

What has happened to,
our love?
  our dreams?
    our lives?

Click

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2004-11-03 10:07 AM


Thats a good question.

-GIS

God blesses.

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
2 posted 2004-11-03 02:43 PM


I know that feeling.
the answers are usually sad.

*Alli4000*
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3 posted 2004-11-03 04:52 PM


I know I've asked these questions before.
As Lexy said, the answers are usually not what you want to hear. :-\


~ALli~


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EveGnosis
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since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
4 posted 2004-11-03 10:29 PM


very powerful! loved it!

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
5 posted 2004-11-04 01:12 AM


Ouch, nice.

Hollow.
Courtney.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

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