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click1
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0 posted 2004-11-02 10:35 PM



Wish for the times
I left you alone.

Wish for the times
I hurried off the phone.

I just want more time
with you.

Wishing for a way
to get through.

Click

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2004-11-03 10:08 AM


Even looks like the ring intervals of a telephone.

-GIS

God blesses.

*Alli4000*
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2 posted 2004-11-03 04:46 PM


Short, but gets the thoughts through in so litle words.  I wish I could do that.
Good write!

~Alli~

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