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PeaceInEverything
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since 2002-10-06
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0 posted 2004-10-31 10:36 PM


Here I wait wondering
will my life end tonight?
Here I am pondering
while others decide what is right.
Scared, not knowing what the others think
My imagination taking me to the brink

Darkness overcomes me
turning my thoughts inside.
What have I done I plea!
while wondering if I have already died.
Rending my soul to bare my pain.
My thoughts for you are here lain.

I love you!
darkness
only temporary
lasts until
it
ends

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2004-11-01 12:11 PM


In darkness, hmm, ... thats it.  If you love darkness, does it love you back?  For me it only made me quiet, nervous, and mean; and I felt quite unloved.  Helpful and not hurtful, true light already loves you.

-GIS

God blesses.

*Alli4000*
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2 posted 2004-11-01 08:26 PM


"I love you!
darkness
only temporary
lasts until
it
ends"


Such an emotional write.

~Alli~

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