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News_From_Nowhere
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since 2002-06-14
Posts 173
CU, NY

0 posted 2004-10-31 03:13 AM


Why
Should we try?
To be-lie
The words that they buy?

Why
Do we deny?
When we cry
Because they all tie

Our love in knots
& our be-gots
are their "care nots"
& mirror rots...

In hopes they try
deny & cry
maybe to lie
for a moment, in our
Why

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm"

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Purity
Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
1 posted 2004-10-31 11:25 AM


Whoa and wow - an eternal loop of the question WHY?
This was fantastic. Loved it!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

EveGnosis
Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
2 posted 2004-11-03 10:16 PM


"& our be-gots
are their "care nots"
& mirror rots..."

i loved this transition.
why oh why indeed. nicely done, news.

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

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