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Purity
Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2004-10-31 02:08 AM


If I pray hard enough,
can you be there for me?
I'll find it out somehow;
the chance is there or not.

Maybe the chance is strong...
I've been strong enough alone.
But if you'd help me learn of love
then the chances that I've missed...

Are good enough to mend
this heart you've proved can bend...
If I pray hard enough....
Are those chances my friend?

If I pray hard enough,
will my wonders prove you true?
Can you come to accept me
when others cut right through?

And what if we can be?
Can we be alone?
Do the words we speak in silence
Truly stand out on their own?

I think we've tried too long,
and the world tells us we're wrong.
If I pray hard enough,
are the chances still all gone?????




Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

[This message has been edited by Purity (10-31-2004 02:47 AM).]

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EveGnosis
Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
1 posted 2004-10-31 02:44 AM


i had forgotten where i put my tissues.
the wonderful thing about chances is that they are wonderful when you are willing to take them.
and i believe that when you take a chance, and you pray hard enough, that which you seek will be given unto you.
but, are you willing to chance that you believe this enough to take the chance to make it true?  you better, or i'll have to kick your...
chances, i guess.
this was beautiful, carrigan.

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

News_From_Nowhere
Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173
CU, NY
2 posted 2004-10-31 03:22 AM


I'm trying hard to believe
& will it to be so
But after all is said and done
those chances hurt, ya know?

Purity, your name says it all, and I
am here with you in your wait of chances.
They say it's 50/50
but my heart says odds aren't fun to play with.
Loved the wording in this one.


"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm"
Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-10-31 03:30 AM


cool poem
soz
tired
might repost a better reply
hollow
courtney

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
4 posted 2004-11-08 07:17 AM


WOW...

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

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