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Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-10-30 02:33 AM


Mediocre face,
Pastel eyes and tired grace
Stretched skin
Painstakingly worn
Day after day.
Till now,
Everything was normal
Till now,
Everything was fine.

Lows and highs,
Exaggerated truth and whitened lies
Innocent unless proven guilty
Night after night.
Till now,
Pain hurt more than love
Till now,
Pain hurt.

Beauty…
God, what an understatement,
God, what an understatement.

Did you notice the change in me?
Or did you cause it?
What happened?
What went wrong?
Because I’m starting to wonder,
If it’ll get worse.

Everything was normal,
Everything was fine.
I protest half-heartedly.

Pain hurt more than love,
Pain hurt.
Now it blends in.

As sky and sea,
Pain and love,
Go together.
As sun and moon,
Pain and love,
Belong.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

© Copyright 2004 Courtney - All Rights Reserved
vampiana
Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere
1 posted 2004-10-30 02:58 AM


oh deary deary me...i am absolutely speechless...you've knocked my socks off..this was awesome..absolutely brilliant..jesus...im seriously speechless..

(insert biggest praise in the world here) <---thats how i feel about this.

Love,
Kurst

"I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson

silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-10-30 05:16 PM


wow

wow

wow

WOW

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

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