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That Type Of Human |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Figured you’d cry, Bow your head, and let me roll my eyes, Pushed you into a corner, And made you feel like I do, All the time, For a bit. Well, guess what? I’ve nailed the lid down, Jack can’t get out of his box, No more surprises. Because now I’m in control, And I’m not wasting anytime. You know Your superficial problems, Your half-hearted promises, Your “best kept” secrets? And that guy you always wear? Ripped him away from you, You don’t need him He doesn’t need you, He told me so, Through his confusion, The glue he inhaled, Which stuck him to you, Made him crazy. Who’s crazy now? You are probably there, Wondering, What the hell? Well I’m here, Thinking, Go to hell. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
loved it. "You are probably there, Wondering, What the hell? Well I’m here, Thinking, Go to hell. " that was so cool. i definitely relate to those hateful feelings you get. but you know, we should try to rise above it..but i cant, so im just being hypocritical... "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
There are so many strong lines here, I know this well, too nice writing, Courtney. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
OMG I LOVE THESE LINES Well, guess what? I’ve nailed the lid down, Jack can’t get out of his box, No more surprises. Because now I’m in control, And I’m not wasting anytime I LOVE THIS POEM, UR AN AMAZING WRITER....AND IM SURE THIS ISN'T THE FIRST, HOPEFULLY NOT THE LAST, THAT I GET TO READ FROM YOU. I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~ |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
What a masterpiece you've crafted, Hollow! The Jack nailed in his box... The guy he wears... Perfectly done, my dear! Rider "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I loved the attitude in the last two lines. Awesome. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
There's this obscure song by Air Supply called "Bring Out the Magic". It's not the same ol' syruppy stuff that those who remember these guys usually did... Likewise, this is your "Bring Out the Magic". I always love reading your writes, as there is always, always a line or two that need to be recorded in the annals of momentous statements of all time: "Figured you’d cry, Bow your head, and let me roll my eyes" For all our sake, keep on telling it like it is! Loveya! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Well, guess what? I’ve nailed the lid down, Jack can’t get out of his box, No more surprises." This part was my fav....and this poem was amazing....  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
wowowowowow amazing girl! heavy... keep it up love and empathy darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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