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The night you left.
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The night you left. |
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ben_pelling Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 59Isle of Wight UK. 
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The night you looked at me Your voice shaky and weak. Looking at me with the your pale face. While you lay on the bed. My face covered in your bed sheets Tears coming down my face. "Don't leave me please don't leave me" I say to you. Never realizing that I haven't told you how much I love you. The Night you left. You told me you loved me I looked at you with my sad brown eyes. Tears coming down my face. "Don't cry baby. I'm now going to a better place." You told me. The Night you Left me I haven't been able to keep your face out of my thoughts. You run away my head. The tears I cry Are the tears that I will never lose. I wish I could have told you That I loved you, that night. All I could was to shed tears. And all I can do now is still shed tears. You told me that You're going to a better place. But I never got a chance to say good bye I didn't even get to say I love you that night. The night you left My life was ending My life was crashing And I was going no where. I can only see Your smile. I can only hear Your voice. I can only feel Your touch. I just wished I got to say Good bye and I loved you The night that you left me for good. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Beautiful. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
so so sad a little repititive, but i still loved it. amazing. love and empathy darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ben, I have a feeling they know how much you loved them . . . this is beautiful writing. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Ben, This poem is soo amazing...I so enjoyed reading it...post some more soon.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Wow, Amazing Poem, Sorri For Your Loss... I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~ |
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