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spritrider87
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0 posted 2004-10-15 04:18 PM



All you see on the outside
Is a lie
A mask I wear
So you wont know
You may think it
Beuatiful
But deep inside
I'm ugly
All these scars
All these brusies
All these broken bones
Deformed
And alone
All they see on the outside
Is an act
Something I put on for show
You may think though
That everythings all right
But deep inside
I've gone insane
Turned against myself
Turned my anger
Into pain
All these scars
All these brusies
All these broken bones
Deformed
And alone
All they see on the outside
Is a girl
Who has not sined
You may belive that
But it's a lie
I have bled
I have shed
I have fed
And gone to bed
All the scars
All the brusies
All the broken bones
Deformed
And alone
You might think I'm beuatiful
But you don't know the truth
You don't know what I've done
You don't know what I've become
I'm ugly

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

© Copyright 2004 Jian Sterry - All Rights Reserved
Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

1 posted 2004-10-16 12:32 PM


You are not what you do. It's separate.  

You are a person and each one is precious and beautiful - Your body and emotions may be broken - but they can heal.  And anything you've done can be forgiven...

spritrider87
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2 posted 2004-10-16 11:26 AM


Copperbell....i don't know what to say to your reply. when i was writing it at first i thought i was talking about how because i don't feel pretty on the inside i must not be outside. but now that i've reread it. i'm beginning to wounder if thats what it was about. and i know that inner scars could heal in time. and so could inner breaks. but changeing the way i treat myself will be much harder. i guess what i'm saying is thanks for the encourgement.

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

3 posted 2004-10-16 11:27 AM


I'm glad to hear you say that.  And you're welcome for the encouragement
Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
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4 posted 2004-10-16 07:20 PM


great poem. give it time.

hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

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