Lump of Black with a Dull Shine

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Dark Poetry #4

Lump of Black with a Dull Shine

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-10-14 01:44 AM

It has soft slimy limbs
I'm not sure if they're legs of tentacles
They love to grab me
They make me do those evil things

A warm juicy touch of these limbs
Her crown just sits on her head with pride
Watch me fall
Your tongue is so slick

Its romantic fetish
Can I have your tongue
I'll hold it in my pocket
But not forever

When I'm done with it
I'll stick it in a blender
Can you slide over here
Wanna touch

Flirting with that that destroys
Wink wink wink
Lets hold hands
Handcuffs

I'll tie you up
And beat you with a club
I hope you feel it
I hope it hurts

You lie to me so
Your smelly breath
You vile creature
You haven't been invited

Your so easy
You push for it
Keep pushing
Push through you

You'll never win
I may sin
But you'll never win
Even if I sin

Leave you with a tender touch
With a filleted hand
Broken fingers
Quivering in fear

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2004-10-14 09:53 AM

This would make a good country song... no, wait that's "Let Your Love Show"...lol
You've got the "Power", GIS ~ Let it show!! This was a very good, very dark write, and I love the imagery of the tongue in blender! That'll teach her to whisper that garbage into your ears, eh?? Enjoyed!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2004-10-14 11:42 PM

If the tongue was part of the physical world yeah. But its not. And she is a stalker not of this world either. I hate her. lol. Thanks Purity. God bless.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

3 posted 2004-10-16 06:18 AM

what a way to get at the whispers of the mind.... love the writing gis..... well done..
keep it comin
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2004-10-16 12:03 PM

Thank you aussie teen.

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

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