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Disregard it
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
Take my heart, Please don't disregard it, Its yours for the taking, I don't need it, Smash it, thrash it, Beat it to a pulp. I will watch you from Afar. Crushing my hopes and Crushing my dreams. Clutching the empty, Space inside my chest But I'm still living, I'm still here, Take my heart, Go on, have it, I'll stand here And watch you Disregard it. Just because you're paranoid, doesn't me they're NOT out to get you. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
its pretty cool didnt have the passion i thought u'd hav considering... but all and all its just another brick in the wall oh woops i mean all in all it was a gud poem. other one was cheesy too! but cool! LOR put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
Pink Floyd? lol "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I liked it. It pretty much describes a musicians life. You don't really care what happens as long as you can do what you do, and that can get pretty crazy at times. Although right now I'm sitting in my parents house, I won't be staying here forever. And I think criticism is pretty freaking cool. Its honesty that usually doesn't get displayed due to coward niceness. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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