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Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2004-10-13 12:21 PM


Can you feel me, there with you?
Rest assured ~ I feel you; I do...
A cross ticks if you listen real hard!
It's time you need ~ don't let it be marred! (For I've)
Got time's thread attached to my soul.

Rest assured ~ I forsake not whom I love
Ordinary people are highly regarded above
Grins of evils suddenly make Evil frown
Envying the hold we have on each other
Relinquish it now, they own you no further!
Such is the beauty of the power of now...and forever!


Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2004-10-13 01:10 AM


It feels nice to see something like this once in a while.  I haven't totally quit smoking yet but I'm working on it.  Great poem.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2004-10-13 07:24 AM


Nothing like spelling it out huh?  lol.  Thats cool.  I usually look for things like this, but I guess its so rare that I find them that...  Thats cool.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

News_From_Nowhere
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since 2002-06-14
Posts 173
CU, NY
3 posted 2004-10-13 09:47 AM


I feel there's something dualistic at play here
Yet I haven't quite formulated the words.
I got a religious connotation from this one,
Friend Purity,
But maybe more as well?
Interesting write and title for sure.

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

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