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Placid Disastor
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
They call her Kitten But thats not really true Because you see A kitten isn't Blue It has no reason To hurt It has seen Nothing wrong It hasn't lived long enough To be seen As a threat And it has no reason To hide To put on a facade Or a disguise But this girl I know Does it all the time I know she hurts She has seen plenty of wrongs She has deen seen as a threat As someone to harm She brought me out of hiding Saw pastmy facade She has seen my struggle As I have hers Though she may not know it I have seen the hurt In her blue shaded eyes Saw the ghost of past pains Haunting her I have seen her fear Of rejection Her distrust Of humanes But for some reason She trusts me And I dont know why When I can turn out Like every one eles When no matter how hard I try Even I Could let her down And hurt her again Even I Could bring pain To her life But maybe she has seen Something deep inside me She has seen In no one eles Because everytime I look When she sees me I see a spark In her eyes I have seen In no one eles Something that causes me To trust her When I have trusted No one They call her kitten And so do I But in my head She will always be Placid Disastor ok this is about a new friend i have aquired at school. Its kind of a let down for those who have seen some of my better work but she liked it so its staying. As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I think this girl is going to end up playing games with you. My kitten did that exact same thing. Pay attention to what she says, how she says it, and what she does and how she does it. And don't ask, "why" but think it. Might save some frustration. The poem was good. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
aknowledge the spark in her eyes.... it might be that she can see vunrebility in you or that she can see something else.... i know those looks all to well... i didnt take any advice coz i thought 'they wont hurt me' but when they do they know how to do it extremely well..... but back to the poem... i love how you have done this... its excelent and its going in my library... keep them comin Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
aussie teen. thanks for the compliment. i dont think she will hurt me. besides the point that she has a boyfriend. we are very good friends. we both realize that we can end up hurting eachother but we still try to make our friendship stronger. As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thats cool. Just the write made me realize that you seem be have at least some in common with me and girls have played some serious head games with me. Just trying to warn you. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
I know. ive had some play some pretty messed up head games with me too. As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
This is gorgeous spritrider. Truthfully. I am so happy that you have met someone. I haven't had the fortune of crossing the path of this forum as often as I would like, so this response is coming sort of late. However, this poem is very meaningful and I am so happy you were fervent in keeping it on. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
hmmm..first i wanna say how much i loved the poem, it was brilliant. Secong i wanna say that you should be careful. I am a girl, and i know how this shiz goes...lol Yeah...i trusted someone once, it didnt work so well....hahaha...no, but really they hurt me more than i have ever hurt in my life...sometimes i still cry...okay ..a lot of the time i cry over it, but regardless, just dont let your guard down too far...cuz if you do, it will hurt much worse... *just my two cents i thought i would add... Kissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
thanks. im a girl too. i wont be psoting anywhere for a while because of some news i just recived a cupole days ago. but i will write again soon. i promise. As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them. |
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