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Dark Poetry #4

Retro Sugar Pills

symphony_of_thoughts
Member

since 2003-08-03

Posts 95
Somewhere

0 posted 2004-10-08 12:13 PM

Razor blades for the babies
Hidden vitamin tablets
Give them what you think
They need
They absolutely want
Chew chew chew
It's nice and sweet
Until the aftertaste
When the righteous cuts
Turn to desperate wounds
And all the most needed advice
Turns to pathological lies
Novacaine the upper descent
No matter how late
How deep
Echoes collide

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-10-08 12:34 PM

I didn't quite get it. But it sounded, wow......nice last line though.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

2 posted 2004-10-08 10:34 AM

Awesome~!~ LOVED IT... The best I could use to respond would be your name...
symphony_of_thoughts !
Mind opening great write!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

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