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silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-10-06 01:03 AM



don't pretend to understand
any of you
just let your own thoughts wonder
upon the fact that maybe im not normal
for once
im not normal
for just a split second im not what you thought i was
dont smile sympathetically
whats that going to do?
make me feel a whole lot better?
is that what its going to do?
is that why you waste your time on me
waste your smiles on someone not worth it
pity
not
sympathy
is all i see.
shut up
go away
i don't need one more look of pure digust
im used to the fact im different
but the continuous scorn
will only result in more pain
more hate
more pitiful glances
more defense
more disgust
more reasons to believe im not me
im not normal

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

© Copyright 2004 L - All Rights Reserved
vampiana
Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere
1 posted 2004-10-06 01:16 AM


awesome. simply awesome. i completely loved it.
Kirst.

"Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2004-10-06 09:41 AM


Laura?

which is exactly what makes you unique.

No one I know is normal, the normal people are the crazy ones.
*grin*

(its true)

we tend to see the world a lil' differently.

Nice writing.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-10-07 01:47 AM


Ah ah ah ah, having a hyperventilating moment. Ah ah ah, can't press the keyboard too hard in utter delight, might have osteoperosis (doing it in science). Whoooooooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaa, I exhaled. That was like, so awesome. I love you so much, you are the best! I don't like normal people anyway. Normal people don't generate their own thought's. Superficial people. Groan. Yuck.

You're great. Don't forget that.

Hollow.
Courtney. xxx

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

Purity
Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
4 posted 2004-10-07 10:26 AM


Uhhh... exactly what Hollow said. You are great, and so was this jewel! And they say I'm not normal? Why? Because I can't control whom with which my soul wishes to intertwine? I might be in the same category for different reasons, silhouetted, but nonetheless, I am so very "there" with you!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

darkness_witch
Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
5 posted 2004-10-07 11:43 PM


hehe wot courts n everyone else sed!

"when ur day is long, and the night, the night is urs alone, when you're sure youve had enough of this life, well hang on. dont let urself go, cus everybody cries n everybody hurts, sometimes. " *sigh* REM... too much talent, like you my dear!

love and empathy
darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

6 posted 2004-10-08 05:10 AM


you inspire..thank you, I think, but yep, I like the dark thoughts too.


Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
7 posted 2004-10-08 06:42 AM


Karen always leads me to the right places...

I loved this..

normal?  what is that and who is that?

I will take not normal any day of the week...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
8 posted 2004-10-09 12:39 PM


Actually for me normal is one side of a giant split in humanity that is then divided into several parts with its different levels and groups, usually with alterior purposes in mind.  The other side to me is the bizarre side.  And at first glance it makes no sense why you would want this side, which is also actually divided in illnumerous ways.  This side is where I am and its so hard.  It takes a stupid person with no patience to go for it, but thats all part of it.  Normal.  Nice write.  I know alot of people feel like this, but thank you for writting about it.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

9 posted 2004-10-09 02:32 AM


smiling at this, I ain't normal either hehe and I lerrrve it. Come to think of it?  I'm on the edge of insanity.

thanks m'lady Serenity for the directions

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

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