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Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

0 posted 2004-10-05 01:29 AM



Welcome to the world
of the broken family
of cold shoulders and shattered sanity
where the broadest backs bear burdens
which were never yours or mine
We patch the cracks
but miss the rifts
as they grow wider over time

Soon, they say, it will be too late
for last ditch efforts and secret strength

Soon, all the bridges we can make
will never span what we've managed to seperate

Every man's an island
but our oceans all are dry
drained, drop-by-drop
through all our salty eyes

It's only a tragedy after we bleed.
Your pain doesn't count 'til it's stained the sheets.

© Copyright 2004 Shay D. - All Rights Reserved
Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-10-05 02:25 AM


Whoa, moving poem here Eromyna, vivid. Loved it. Nice signature too, very true.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2004-10-06 09:34 AM


very nice
as I call this the "age of dysfunctia" . . .

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