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Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2004-10-04 09:24 AM


There but for a moment,
the hurt enrages the heart to defense
temper flaming towards you out of anguish and love
words attack to hide the grief in total misunderstanding
I'm stuck with you for life; the facades now turn and lie.
but is the facade the lack of hatred for yourself who
deems facade a hate?
the flickering candle reminesces
the angelic valor of the truest truth denied
wings bruised in turning away in such confined space
not broken... still healable... still feathered with life, somewhere.
And after there but for a moment...
I remember it all well...I know
Why I hyperextended my own wings of love for you.
And I cry alone.

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This is a repost from a few years ago, but it was on my heart and mind today, so I felt compelled to re-share with new friends. Purity

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2004-10-04 07:48 PM


This is a nice piece now as it was then.  Its cool for it to be reposted.  Nothing has to be broken forever even if it seems like it.  

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2004-10-04 08:14 PM


Good God, this is beautiful.
Thank you for the repost.

EveGnosis
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since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
3 posted 2004-10-05 09:07 PM


beautiful, angel purity. beautiful.

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
4 posted 2004-10-05 11:48 PM


Don't know if I'd read this before (tho the title seemed familiar)

No matter, the reading changes with the perspective in any case.

Nicely done!

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
5 posted 2004-10-07 12:32 PM


I read it again, just to see if I could see something.  I think I think too fast and slowing down would probably help, I guess I just have a hard time with stuff like this because I don't understand.  All your work from what I've read ends with a peaceful kinda of feeling.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

Purity
Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
6 posted 2004-10-07 01:10 PM


Thanks to all!
GIS ~ You are such a gem. This was an apology requiem. I allowed myself to finally vent to him so endeared...His facade was the lie of my being "stuck with him for life". I was attacking in defense to ask if, since he hated facades, did he hate himself? Then, the peace sets in...and I finally come to understand unrequited love. I'm learning from your poems that sometimes it's better only to imagine... Love!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
7 posted 2004-10-08 01:24 AM


oh i liked!

this is the first of yours ive read, and i must say, you have impressed!

wow! i'll be readin more!

keep on keeping on

LOR

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

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