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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-10-03 10:17 AM



I'm open for recieving
Take what you can
Its for the taking

They all come from the far corners of the globe
To recieve my beautiful disgust for collection
And drop a golden stone that breaks into the millions

Free to spend this cash where you please
Why are you still trapped
And wrapped in the static confusion
Its all a matter of what you want
The just do it here on site

Broke and broken
Somehow I'm placed
And set up this wall
The obstacles I'm faced

I'm free as I can be
The freedom is addiction
And freely given
To the truly free

What is time that would hold me back
I never knew
I never will til the day I die
And then once again I'll be free

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Purity
Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
1 posted 2004-10-03 10:44 AM


Very real for me!
And yet when those "pillars" of the community become the "pillows" of our greed,
we totally lose all freedom to be
priceless.
Good one, GIS!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2004-10-03 02:28 PM


Yeah thats true.  I didn't totally think it out all the way, or I at least thought it out in a different way, but that is true.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2004-10-04 07:45 PM


Craig,

in this:

I'm free as I can be
The freedom is addiction
And freely given
To the truly free


we find our strength.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2004-10-04 07:51 PM


Yeah its that power of choice.  And everything is a choice including strength.  thats cool.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

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