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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-10-03 10:03 AM

Why
phobia of happiness,
aid of cancer, faster the roll
higher the toll. Beauty is black, and
no turning back. The end is now
and now is broken.
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this is the repost I was talking about.

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2004-10-03 10:51 AM

Deeply dark... Thank God there is a someone whom is always willing to fix the broken ends.
& I've gotta stop smoking... Glad you re-posted this!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-10-03 02:13 PM

wow...i really loved this. It was soooo dark, and truthful, and just amazing.

YOur poems are always the bomb, i cant wait to hear more.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-10-04 01:36 AM

Whoa. Stunned and studded. ??? Don't know where that came from. Glad you reposted it.

Hollow.
Courts.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

4 posted 2004-10-04 01:59 PM

I love this! I'm speechless now!

- Rvr

"Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

5 posted 2004-10-04 07:27 PM

Thank you everybody. When you feel like crap just write and even though you might still feel like crap you'll have a pretty creepy and some what beautiful poem.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2004-10-04 08:13 PM

I love this Craig and so true, sometimes my darkest writes help me see myself.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

7 posted 2004-10-05 04:38 PM

Thank you. Its easy to loose yourself, but its hard to find it.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

8 posted 2004-10-08 05:35 PM

nice repost greeny...

Awake through motion with curiosity to curtain your first move
Over arms length they'll break protocol
Jealous envy for the youngest one
To be the

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

9 posted 2004-10-08 11:53 PM

Thanx. I think you were still posting when I posted it the first time. Nice to see you again.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

10 posted 2004-10-10 08:36 PM

"faster the roll
higher the toll"

kewl!

coyote

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

11 posted 2004-10-11 08:30 PM

Thank you coyote.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

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