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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-10-03 01:49 AM

im alone
again
and my heart
is overflowing with pain
of needing you
one more time
one last breath
one more way of telling you how much i care
so you don't leave me
so im no longer cold every night
while i lay awake
listening to the rain
pitter patter on my window
and thinking
of you
as i cry
needing you so much
my hands shake
and i need to hold on to something
for fear if i dont
i'll fall deep into nothingness
sinking into my own reality
of you not being near
and i cant stop wanting you
for all i can do is think of how you used to be there
even when i wasn't myself
you were there
by my side
oozing with love
with care
with appreciation
and those moments
make me ache
with the realisation
you arent anyway near me
and i ask for just one more moment with you
so you can love me just a little longer
so i can love you so much more

*dont like this one. just tryna vent

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

1 posted 2004-10-03 02:23 AM

like it or not, it was a hard-hitter for me. exactly how i feel for someone right now that time and circumstance, and distance and everything makes our union iffy. gave me reason to pause. nice way of being saddening.

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-10-03 02:37 PM

I love this. It reminded me a lot of, well, me. I couldnt have written this better myself. It brought back a lot of pain, but its good to know, that i am not alone.

I think i will save.

Karisas

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-10-04 01:24 AM

You know, some say...it is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all. Sad, but I think it's true. And this poem, just made me think to that saying, don't ask why....I liked it, especially the shaking hands. Not shaking hands when you meet with another person and you say "Hi, I'm Todd (if u r todd) nice to meet you" the trembling hands. I'm making a mess of this!

Nice work, touched.

Hollow.
Courtney.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

4 posted 2004-10-04 04:07 AM

ooo as i have said before....... the best poems are those which are just vented feelings and scrambled words.

i love

l&e

darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2004-10-04 08:04 PM

Laura,

and what an amazing vent it is:

for all i can do is think of how you used to be there
even when i wasn't myself

Good Lord, I KNOW.

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

6 posted 2004-10-06 03:20 AM

if this is what you write when you are just venting...write every time you vent, because i absolutely ADORE this poem...its so brilliant and beautiful in a dark sort of beautiful..and..wow...my favourite..my favourite..!
Kirsty.

"Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko

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