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mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2004-09-29 08:22 PM

How often does the light of the sun
follow you into your un-wanted memories?
As the lost closet of your own Desiree
falters into the same lies.
Strike me down
with one look, and all those reflections
you considered friends,
from the forbidden.
This Holy satire of anguish endings.
Who will come first?

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-09-29 08:36 PM

hey, get your flashlight outta my head
LOL

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-09-29 10:36 PM

Brilliant.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

3 posted 2004-09-30 12:02 PM

freaking awesome write! like a spork to the heart

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2004-10-01 01:04 PM

tell me about it . . .

and all those reflections
you considered friends,

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

5 posted 2004-10-08 05:22 PM

beautiful poetry poe

Pimpin and panderin, on a level you can't serve, dismantle, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, and verbs

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

6 posted 2004-10-09 09:44 AM

Midnitesun ( Kacy ), your responses and write's are extremely deep and intellectual - camouflaged by optimistic sincerity and good O'fun. Special!! Thank you.

Hollow, good to hear from you again. I'm humbled. Thank you.

Eve, freaking awesome, I like that a lot. A real lot. I'm going to have to steal it. Thanks for stopping by.

lw, I see you've taken that ride your self. It's OK to try a different taxi. Thanks again.

eor, my man. Thank you for all your support!! I'm waiting!!

Thanks again all, thank you!!

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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