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Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2004-09-29 12:24 PM

In Once Upon,
the night can never blind the mortal's eyes
The dragon's breath will be a guide
by lighting up the skies.
The willow trees are such grand places
underneath which lovers kiss
And every wish written in the sands
not a shooting star will miss.
In Once Upon,
the streets of gold lead to all of those you love
the pain long gone, wisped away by winds
and the breeze dances of the dove.
No martyrs here, not a single tear
Just the joy of reverie
And the eyes of the soul with such purity of sight
Have no mysts through which to see.

To our demise, our mortal eyes
are skewered by earth's polluted ways
The lifemap posted to our heads
Directs to places to shroud our gaze.
But look with your soul through the misery
To the possibility above the beyond.
To a place more beautiful, you see
Yes, you see...
In Once Upon

Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself...

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2004-09-29 12:32 PM

That was beautiful. I don't think there is anything else to say. That was beautiful.

-GIS

*read my signature. add

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

2 posted 2004-09-29 04:26 PM

Ok, that's it, I'm adding all your poems. =)
this is really cooool! your making me jelous now, why didn't I come up with this? bleh, well anywho, Rock on Mr. C. Chantz ...your Chantz are groovy trance. (lol, sorry, I couldn't resist)

- River

"Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-09-29 10:39 PM

Bloody hell, Purity, this was amazing. Once upon a time. Nice work, creative.

Hollow.
Courts.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

4 posted 2004-09-30 12:22 PM

it's so d*m* beautiful, it's sad. i never thought of "once upon" as a place, but will you take me there again. we dont have to stay long. i'm gonna haveta quit. cant touch this, but know it was amazing.

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

News_From_Nowhere
Member

since 2002-06-14

Posts 173
CU, NY

5 posted 2004-10-01 12:21 PM

"the pain long gone, wisped away by winds
and the breeze dances of the dove."
Oh weaver of words!
But can I get there from here?
Beautiful, Carrigan. Thank you!

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

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