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Headache, Fat, Chicken Bone, and Nothing of Me
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Headache, Fat, Chicken Bone, and Nothing of Me |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Work for him the man with the scars Massive confusion and schizophrenia Hard and sweaty I can feel my brain roll over Freezing and empty settled among lies Drastic head injury and supidity I've lost my temple and the burning thwart Convulsing in reality and I vomit Day in and day out I'm dead within myself Gentle rot squares choke off my heart And I can hear it I hear something run but see nothing flee Except a little damp spot wet from the warmness of me And my stomache chokes too with the spell of drudgery A curse blessed and birthed from within me Did she hear when it collapsed Did she see it, feel it Did she notice anything different No its only hate inside her heart Judgement will be fair in the light of truth Dead from the spot of growth Solitude of complacent comfort And I'm forgotten forever to join the many dead only quietly He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Uhh... *speachless* Dude, this was your triumphant grand. The title should definitely be the title of your book, which I do expect one day! But the beauty of the title is that it hints not to what lies beneath it. This was a phenom! I emplore....MORE!!!!! Extremely well done....said bowingly. psst - don't you just love to end sentences in ly?...mee too! Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself... |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Book, that's pretty cool. This seems to be the only thing I'm good at so maybe you're right. Wow that means I need to figure out how to gather it all together and then an order to fit it all. lol. And somehow do it kind(ly). lol. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
start by printing everything you've ever posted on this website  This is one of those things that will be stuck in my head for a while...kindove like the "Cracked plastic cactus that was unatached" (something a guy wrote in my class) lol. grrrooovy ! - Riva "Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
"i hear something run but see nothing flee... a curse blessed and birthed from within me... judgement will be fair in the light of truth... solitude of complacent comfort" i'm going to agree with purity on this one. i also got hooked into this one by the humor of the title, and then got bomblasted all to who knows what with the intensity of your words. again, oof! i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you both for what you said. I think I'm going to repost a poem I wrote a long time ago, posted here, and then haven't really thought about in a while. I didn't think about those lines seperately like that or in that order, but that does sound good. Thank you for pointing them out for me. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good Lord, this is brilliant! I wish I had written this . . . |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
You have way better than this littlewing, but thank you none the less. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I SO do not, and your much welcome |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Oh when the purest of pures try to out modest each other...it's so pretty. I happen to think you both are grand. Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
littlewing I'll just pretend to agree with you. lol. Purity- I think you see a little deeper than me, actually I'm just about certain. lol. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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