blindfolds for the children

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Dark Poetry #4

blindfolds for the children

symphony_of_thoughts
Member

since 2003-08-03

Posts 95
Somewhere

0 posted 2004-09-28 06:46 PM

The head rules the body
And the phrase so true
Incapacitates my being
Communist head
Leaves capitalist ideas
Fester for rot
I've tried rather hard
Half-effort reconciliation
And of persistent nature
Doesn't let go
Gripping any and every lobe
Washed, bleached in fluid that
Dyes men's souls blank
Dripping rancid dews
Over eyes, limbs, heart
Inevitably on the path
To finally steal me away

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2004-09-28 07:37 PM

"bleached in fluids that dyes men's souls blank"... excellent!KUDOS ~ Awesome poem.

Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself...

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-09-28 10:28 PM

Blew me away, same part Purity mentioned struck me as great. Awesome write.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

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