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Purity
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Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2004-09-28 01:08 AM


The Dead of Night...Can't Do Anything For You
Cold War... Pied Piper of Better Days, Instant
I Own My Personal Demons!
if you ~ One Opening From the Solid Jar ~
lie to me...

The Big City, without you
i miss you, Feared and Afraid
Made the mistake, again ~
Shattered image of my former self Tried to escape
Mirror, mirror on the wall
Flickering in and out... Bad Patience
the most of all... Solid Space... Snake...
A Perfect Love... Renewed.

Attention!
Cold Bone Shivers; Deface the child, Vampire!
Jealousy? Rest?? Beg and Plead???
Will I give in?

Ocean Eyes ~ did I let you go?
Suspected, Torn... No Reply...
FRIGHTENING...
You never knew... No Nets...Humiliation...Waste...
Broken Freedom...Air...
I just need you.

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Okay, I am not going to take credit for this one, as it is simply the title of all the poems in the thread put together as a poem. I find it remarkable how often just the titles alone make a poem, so I thought I'd share this insight with you. This was exactly the titles in order at the time I came on to see them, and as such it shows how beautifully we work together on this site. This one was written by all of us (as of the last fifty threads or so).Credit to vampiana, darkness_witch, wranx, Hollow_Emptiness, green-itchy-stuff, EveGnosis, symphony-of-thoughts, silhouetted, River, News_From_Nowhere, Susan, Mad_Hatter, CrEaTuRe, ~ K ~, littlewing, exhale and Purity.


Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself...

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-09-28 01:20 AM


what a nice way to tie them all together, all because of some very creative reading on your part
wranx
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2 posted 2004-09-28 01:25 AM


A nice knit indeed!

I've always found reading to be an inspiration.

Oh! and I never got your mail friend Purity.
Now you have mail.

Ed


darkness_witch
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Underneath
3 posted 2004-09-28 04:37 AM


hehe I LOVE IT!

made me smile. thanks for that.

love and empathy
darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

River
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4 posted 2004-09-28 05:58 PM


*grinning from ear to ear* ha ha, clever one you are! great job! I like this =)

    - River

  

"Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home

Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
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5 posted 2004-09-28 10:38 PM


Haha, that was excellent! Well enjoyed.

Hollow.
Yay, my poems are in there too!

Thought it fitted well all together.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx
6 posted 2004-09-29 12:08 PM


And look at you always calling me a genious.  You brilliant individual being you.  Very clever and much enjoyed.

-GIS

psst, oh yeah, add*

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

vampiana
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Nothing and Nowhere
7 posted 2004-09-29 01:01 AM


how very clever! i loved it.. so cool.. *big smiles*

"Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko

EveGnosis
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8 posted 2004-09-30 12:04 PM


actually astonishing what the poem ends up really saying. very neat, purity. too much time on your hands? lol. this was good

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

Mad_Hatter
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Canada
9 posted 2004-09-30 12:18 PM


very cool.  I likey aloty.
*Alli4000*
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10 posted 2004-09-30 06:51 PM


Wow! This was soo creative! Great job!

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

silhouetted
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11 posted 2004-10-08 01:30 AM


hehe.

too bad it was my worst poems ...

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

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