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Can't Do Anything For You |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
I miss the crystal in your eyes I want to reach into your soul And grab it from the dark corner Then delicatly place it Back where it belongs I want to make you happy I want to bring your smile back But i know I can't I want to be who you want me to be So I'll try And do what you want me to Beacuse I love you And hopefully you'll love me for it I want to make you better I want you to be happy with me And yourself And I know I can't I can't do anything about it I can't save you from yourself I can't help you And I hate myself because of that nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
it is really good. and im not just saying that. this isnt just a random manufactured comment "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
This hits close to home. It's brilliant, and it makes me wonder why on earth you ever stopped writing in the first place, well posting stuff anyway. Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is beautiful darkness..... i know theses feelings and you have expressed them beautifully.... i love your writing, its alwaysso heart felt. keep it up Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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