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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
In an instant it all stops A drop instantly bursts on the ground Instant death of an eagle in the sky Plummets to an instant stop on the ground Instant connection to the earth You know and instantly you're happy A hole through your heart and instant blood Dying until you're instantly dead Pause til you instantly move Your voice is instantly heard Before it instantly stops Burning fire slows until its instantly out Gaze into a mirror until you instantly see yourself The clock ticks instantly one second after an instant A gray hair instantly falls out A tree instanly dies and in another instantly sways, instantly falls, instantly stops, rots and is completely gone in another instant Confused until the instant you understand In hale a cigarette with an instant pull Its cancer will hurt in another instant In an instant we will all die And our lives went by in an instant blink of an eye Instantly look back on how it went And in an instant is no more Repetitious drum beat one instant after another Instant vibrations on a guitar string instantly plucked to make an instant sound to fill that riff at that instant Instantly done A bird instantly chirps I instantly hear And this natural music is instantly gone Instantly said Instantly written Instantly saved Or instantly dead Each and every word you say is instantly heard Before the instant you finish saying Rise one instant after another One instant after another creates instant motion He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
And...instantly a success! Wow the instant the inspiration flows into you, within an instant the jewels flow instantly out. What instantly impressed me about this one was the imagery, and how good a job was done here to show how interrelated everything is...instantly. Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself... |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
And it came to me while I was standing in the middle of the yard looking at the sky. lol. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Haha nice work GIS, reminded me of lightening. And of pressing fastforward on a video, and then pressing stop. So that you have a good chance to take in all the detail before it speeds past you. Instantly genius. Hollow. Courts. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
"reminded me of lightening. And of pressing fastforward on a video, and then pressing stop. So that you have a good chance to take in all the detail before it speeds past you." (credit to hollow) GOD YOU GUYS ARE GOOD! I feel honored to be amongst... Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself... |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
I am instantly hooked on these instant words  "Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you. Right now I hate myself, but you guys are freaking awesome. Thank you again. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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