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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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0 posted 2004-09-25 11:45 PM



Rush, a raging rush.
Everything is so fast
Short thinking
Slow reacting
Awesome feeling
Something so good
Something so nice
Its all just so tasty sweet
And nice to the touch
Just a feel

Smooth

Narcotic dates
Pratice skills
Luscious skin
Easy cash
Something free
Pornography
The devils thrills

Do it now or regret it later
Its all about me
Just please me

Sit and watch

He waits

Furious power and shreds underneath

Just a drip of his hate

A touch
...I'm touched

The backwards dance

Its all I know

I know nothing else

I see nothing else

I can be nothing else

I'm blind from another way

I can't see

They're so many

The painful dance

The blood

Hurt

Its all slowing down

Twirling spin and no control

Trapped

Screaming from behind electric iron bars

Hotter than before...

He waited with patience...
I have no more.....

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

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Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
1 posted 2004-09-25 11:54 PM


Incredible! Loved the slowing pace through spaced lines to the end. Great one GIS.

Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself...

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