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vampiana
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-09-22 05:46 AM


Institutionilized,
Inside my own head
Try to escape the voices,
So they chase me instead.
Backed into a corner,
Held captive by my mind.
Running round in circles,
Of the delusional kind.

(i know its real short, but i couldn't be bothered making it longer)

"Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko

© Copyright 2004 Kirsty - All Rights Reserved
Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-09-23 01:46 AM


I liked it. It was short and to the point.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-09-26 10:05 PM


I really llked it alot. I havent been able to get on in a while...for um...various reasons, but i am glad to be back!

Your writing is brilliant.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

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