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silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-09-22 12:48 PM


your so cold these days
never want to talk to me
always turning away
hesitant to make it look like you care
and everytime i want to do something about it
you turn away
again
please
hold my hand
reassure me
make me feel wanted again
cuz i cant take you pushing me away
pushing me out
needing you to grip me
if things go wrong
but you refuse to let me in
refuse to catch my eye
in fear
fear of what?
fear of my strength?
fear of my commitment?
but one look in your eyes
when you let me in
for that split second
tells me your afraid only of yourself
your afraid of holding my hand
afraid of letting me be
afraid of falling in love with me

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

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vampiana
Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere
1 posted 2004-09-22 04:10 AM


i don't know why you didnt like it. i thought it was cool..but hey, thats just one persons opinion, wait for others. i have a feeling theirs are gonna be the same as mine though...

"Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-09-23 02:00 AM


I thought it was cool. Hey, lucky you got me to welcome you with open arms!!! whoa, jinks just pounced at me, I was giving her the same tips Mufasa gave Simba...."stay low to the ground" Hahahaha. I'm really happy for you

Hollow,
CK.

(thats courtney kim btw, not calvin klein.)

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
3 posted 2004-09-26 10:24 PM


wow...hun, this was AMAZING!!!!

I can relate, only i was the one who did the pushing. Whoever you wrote this about, is lucky they have someone who understands so well. The person i pushed away, sorta just gave up, and before i knew what i had lost, he was gone...i'm still trying to let go...to forget. I am always wishing i hadnt been so scared, hadnt been so horrible to him. I really love him, and i screwed up.

anyways..like i said before, amazing write! I really love it.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

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