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silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-09-21 03:00 AM



i close my eyes
shut you out
don't need to hear you
or see you
make all your mistakes
right in front of me
ive had enough
i want out
i need to breathe
i need to see your face
but i refuse to let you in
refuse to watch you throw your life away
while i need to hold you
should have held you
knowing that was the only way
i could've saved you
from yourself
from everyone else
from me
but i won't hold you
i won't let you in
too many mistakes
too many times
and i just need you to make it right
but i cant
and i wont
and i don't need to see you

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

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Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-09-21 03:05 AM


Cool dude. Motivational. But dammit, I want my poem back on here. Grrr.....anyway, great great great, so glad you have it back.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

vampiana
Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere
2 posted 2004-09-22 12:19 PM


oh...my...god...
i..absolutely...loved...this...
so...awesome...l..o...l...
kirsty....

"Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko

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