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~K~
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since 2004-07-27
Posts 148


0 posted 2004-09-19 08:47 AM



What your seeing,
is merely an illusion.
What your feeling,
a symptom of the cause.
I take it down a notch
& still my thoughts
drop like a sickness.
I'm getting better
but I will
never find a cure.
You knew this & still
you helped me search.
Now I don't know
if I should fly or fall.

© Copyright 2004 ~K~ - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2004-09-19 03:06 PM


K?

I do believe you have crawled inside of my brain . . .

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-09-19 06:29 PM


"I'm getting better
but I will
never find a cure."

I liked this. Nice title too.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-09-19 06:36 PM


if I should fly or fall.

I feel myself falling, but am trying so hard to fly.

Good question ~K~ I hope you find the answer.

Enjoyed your thoughts.

Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
4 posted 2004-09-20 09:33 PM


only been small occassions recently where i thought flying would be great....

then i realized if i climb all the way up "there"..and fell...wouldnt be so bad...
there is plenty of beauty in gravity

and sometimes...there are soft places to land



silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
5 posted 2004-09-21 12:29 PM


I take it down a notch
& still my thoughts
drop like a sickness.

love it

as usual this is brilliant. i love ur layouts

LOR

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

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