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did i let you go?
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did i let you go? |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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what did i do now? what was my mistake that made you turn around in hate? did i make a sound to budge or move your concentration? did i breathe to hard and blow your careful thoughts away? did i laugh in mockery at your plain attempt to bring me back? did i make you feel bad when my shoulders were no longer there to lean on? did i make you a fool when i let you go let you go forever? did i let you cry when i turned away and never looked back? did i push you away when i knew i needed you more than ive ever needed anything? did i let you go and watch you as you walked away from me? did i stand and watch while you ran off doing whats best for you? Did I let you go let you leave and never love me again? Tell me, Did I let you go? put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Oh this one was sad. It's like the repercussions of letting someone go. Sigh. I hope this never happens, and I hope it never happened. I hope all the best for you. I hope everything's going to be ok. I hope we always have hope. I hope I'm going to stop soon. This poem made me soppy. Hollow. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
*wipes away tear and sighs in despair (lol)* i only just saw this one...so of course i read it immediately..and loved it... "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko |
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