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symphony_of_thoughts
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since 2003-08-03
Posts 95
Somewhere

0 posted 2004-09-16 06:16 PM


I'll drown myself
In the tunnel
Under your hindsight
Leave some directions for you
To piece the path
John doe on the mountain
What you suspected
But left in the tunnels



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click1
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since 2003-03-25
Posts 152
usa
1 posted 2004-09-16 09:22 PM


WOW!
     Tough and hard...deep

  Good Job!!

Click

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-09-22 04:07 AM


i like! a lot

cool layout

LOR

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

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