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fractal007
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958


0 posted 2004-09-16 12:24 PM


They cursed their bones
and killed their friends
while onward looked
the pallid face

One score and eight
forgotten days
I turned my back
and blindly roamed

On my return
I found you there
enslaved by pain
encased in fear

Again I left
One score and eight
more days I hoped
and blindly roamed

They burned their friends
and crushed their bones
while onward looked
the pallid face

2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
--Smit
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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2004-09-16 12:50 PM


kevin,

this is an amazing write . . . it has that Medieval feel to it, please tell me your inspiration.  

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