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silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-09-15 03:29 AM


i watch you laugh
with my heart in your mouth
teeth slamming down
tearing at my flesh

i watch you rise
floating over me with such domination
prevailing in my hesitation
laughing at my limitation

i watch you smile
that wicked smile
that reminds me im just another
another one of them

i watch you grind my spirit
with your putrid and ghastly breath
blowing with such force
i buckle and fall away

i watch you think
watch you make your decision
watch you stand to meet me
and make my lip quiver

i watch you stare
staring deep into my lost conviction
reading every little secret I'd owned
and watch you throw them all away

i watch you
and watch you
and cant decide what your about to do
when it hit me, or rather you did

(sorry, not writing well lately. my head hurts, my feet stink, and i dont love **___**)

say wat you will, say what you mean, but you could never offend cuz your dirty words come out clean

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Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-09-15 03:47 AM


Harrumph, you wild fox. You need to tell me it was a song, or otherwise, i will get a tad nauseous and fall from intoxicating greatness. That did not make much sense, nice song.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2004-09-15 01:44 PM


Laura?

I can more than relate very well to this
and it is a disgusting fact that one
is even subjected to such horrors . . .
know you are not alone on this, trust me
and you have to allow yourself room to
forgive yourself, (not that you need
forgiving, but those are the feelings,
unfortunately - we are left with (guilt)

then the love comes . . .



never apologize for your feelings . . .

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