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vampiana
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-09-15 02:15 AM



March in your straight forward line
As the dictators whistle blows overhead
Not a step out of place
Follow the whizzing orders.
Do not disobey, if you value your head.

Growing tired by the building pressure
Work piling higher and higher
The stress; rising blood pressure,
So easy to just switch off
The light of your mind.

Pull the covers over your head
Ignore the shouts, the calls, the whistles,
Trapped in this hiding place
Where you can avoid
Daily trauma.
Protected from other's tribulations
Relaxed, you breather free.

The noise has died down
Gaining confidence, you sneak a peek
The pile higher than ever
Hits you full forse
Knee deep, you try to crack a smile
As your mind snaps.

Tomorrow, is the today we feared yesterday.

© Copyright 2004 Kirsty - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2004-09-15 03:05 AM


This is kinda what I feel like right now.  No, I feel like a p.o.s., but it happens so who cares.
-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2004-09-15 01:35 PM


Ha! I third that . . .

would love to just sink beneath the blankets . . .

I loved the George Orwell,
"Big Brother is watching"
feel of this . . .

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