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Liar's Heart |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Simply striving straight sucked simplicity Slowly slip sorry such stupidity, Silly since surely someone sufferd so Heavy hate handled here handed him Hold her hand healthy hero high Humbly heaven hoards his house In ignorance is irritation Isn't it incorrect in its instance Irritate inocense inside intense Total talk to the top, Together to take the tip Today twists tomorrow's trash I interpret it informatively Intolerant isn't it Idiot My motives must mature More managed memories mare Maybe moving might mend more Should she stay still so shocked? Sick should steer straighter stretch So sit, stand, slowly stop Tomorrow teaters to take the turn Taking ten times to tell Territory towards torture's time Under unique utter unwind Ups unfold until undermind Unafraid, unable Picture pleased pushing passed Peer presure partly plugged Poker points popping pass Isn't it individual I'm in indecent ideology Irritating itch inside Dancing dearly dates depart Do dandelions dance differently? Dude decide, don't dare drop, dumby! He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 [This message has been edited by green_itchy_stuff (09-14-2004 01:51 AM).] |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
dude, awesome poem. i loved the alliteration, it was so cool. nice work. i can't believe no one else has replied yet... did u get my email, about the musician thing? kirst. Tomorrow, is the today we feared yesterday. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Do dandelions dance differently? I is idiot. But Bonnie bangs Craigs clever crazy....poem thingy ok i liked it, that was what I was trying to get at, lol. it's very clever Craig.  you rock.- Bon Running out of pain |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*smile* it is always good to practice and experiment . . . |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you everybody. I take it the "big picture" remains a mystery. lol. -Craig He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*laughing* to me, yes unless: a painful relationship, peer pressure, someone (the girl?) being let go, and wondering really about one's own fate -->>idealism I have no clue . . . I tried (usually I am good at this) |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
When you're in a crapy mood you might even say it. Hint the predominant letters in order say.... -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
LMFAOOOO OMG you are not! |
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Defective Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 73Salisbury NC |
Haha I read this before and didn't really know what to say to it, until I read it again and got the "big picture" hahaha . Nice read. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
did I miss something? |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Hahahahahahaha, I don't think you are, I think your bloody brilliant, nice work. I love it even more for the message. Wow, that's great, smart. I'm so impressed lol. Hollow. Bloody Brilliant Buddy. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
LMAO!, that's great! awesome job! I've never seen anything like this before. I gotta save this'un...  ~*brezee*~ |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
sweet, everybody laughed. Yeah when I feel crappy I say stuff like this like its my life's motto. lol (how the Hell do you screw up spelling "crappy?") -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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