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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-09-13 11:36 PM

Tear

Blood

Sweat

Rain

A message from the heavens
Her imbalmed body lie stiff within her little room

I love you
A distant stare echoes frozen in his eyes
Petrified

Years, minutes, days, weeks,
...Time

Beautiful way of electric smiles
Fine curves,
Understanding a comprehesion of a love psychology,
Volumized encyclopedia

What makes the stones begin to weep,
The fragrant rose lost its essense
and is silent now...

Memories from his life
Welded to his brain
Cage, a fense volted a trillion times wraped sugar sweet and sealed with a razor roll.

Dropped the key inside
His evacuation from the pain
Bitter torn escape,

...and God I beg you

            ...to loose the angel,

                          ...dropped with tape

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2004-09-15 02:44 PM

and to think that this had no replys...damn...Craig this deserves 100. (at least)

What makes the stones begin to weep,
The fragrant rose lost its essense
and is silent now...

dude you are going to make me cry one of these days if you keep going with this awesome write stuff...and beleive me, very hard to get me to cry it is

- Bon

"Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2004-09-16 01:49 AM

Thanx River. Its actually about my best male friend. He's pretty freakin cool and he's a drummer on top of that.
-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2004-09-16 12:47 PM

You know . . . when I read this, it reminded me of Hendrix and the love he had for his Lady -->> his guitar . . . and it read as that, as one man looking over at a woman, in love . . .

I like how you ended with the angel and the dropped tape?

(you mean the sticks?)

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2004-09-16 10:21 PM

Drop an angel out of Heaven with tape to mend a broken heart. The sticks as in drummer's sticks.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

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