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Dark Poetry #4

Phantom

~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2004-09-12 05:42 AM

In shades
iridescent
in nature
I beg her
to gather
in my arms
to focus
her attention
in my direction
I usher in
destruction
just to
loosen
her chains

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-09-12 10:38 AM

theres that word again.."focus"

focus

beautiful destruction

maybe, at times, like a phoenix

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-09-12 04:47 PM

to focus
her attention
in my direction

Interesting ~K~

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-09-13 01:43 AM

"I usher in
destruction
just to
loosen
her chains"

Awesome write.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

4 posted 2004-09-13 10:23 AM

Excellent choice of words on this one ~K~! Iridescent... to gather in my arms...
LOVED IT!

Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself...

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2004-09-13 05:24 PM

bound and gagged
she lie beneath
my feet
I stood above
this mortal
a portal
to me
you see she
is my salvation . . .

(heh - I love your writing, K
I would love to write with you sometime)

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