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Dark Poetry #4
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vampiana
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere
0 posted 2004-09-11 08:48 PM


My pain
Is like an open wound
Gushing blood
Exposed flesh
My vunerability
On display
For the world to see.

Soon a scab will form
Hard and crusty
A protective layer
Hiding the ugly truth
Beneath
There is a chance of recovery.
The scab is picked
And the wound fresh again.

In time
My wound will heal completely
The new pink skin
A memory
Of previous times
I went through
To get here today
Ready to begin
Once again.

Tomorrow, is the today we feared yesterday.
© Copyright 2004 Kirsty - All Rights Reserved
brezee
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since 2003-06-02
Posts 140
1 posted 2004-09-11 11:51 PM

wow...i like how you held the theme throughout and used it for each detailed stanza....nice job


~*brezee*~
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