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vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-09-10 03:08 AM

Trapped in a world, devoid of hope
Stumbling through, hourless days
Waking without a reason
Nothing to look forward to
Bored by mindless TV.
Highlights consisting of short sentences with you
Fighting back tears as imperfect grades sit in my lap
Taunting their red numbers of failure
Trying to keep my head off the desk, as fatigue consumes me
Surrounded by puerile behaviour, the more withdrawn I become
Told to be myself, stay true forever
But I don't even know me
All I see of me is a blank dot, taking up precious space.
Growing bitter by the lack of direction
Too easily influenced by others opinions
Am I hiding under so many masks, I've lost track, lost count?
Do I really know what I know?
Do I really say what I say?
Do I even like what I like?
Why does it have to be so hard?
Why did the simple days have to vanish?
Giving anything for them to return
I rock, sobbing pathetically.
Wishing I could find me,
Hoping I might be found.

Tomorrow, is the today we feared yesterday.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-09-10 07:38 PM

i absolutlely loved this.
Amazing write, i must say.
I can really relate to a lot of your poems, including his one!

I love how you write also. Its sweet! hehehe

Kant wait to hear more!

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

brezee
Member

since 2003-06-02

Posts 140

2 posted 2004-09-11 12:50 PM

*ahh* I find myself asking these questions a lot...great job once again...

~*brezee*~

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2004-09-11 01:55 AM

You're good and I appreciate such work. I'm probably a little older than you, but that doesn't matter. 20 You're good. Keep it up.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

4 posted 2004-09-12 01:53 AM

Thanks everyone for the comments. GIS-you are older than me, so it means heaps to me, to have an older person acknowledge my work, thanks so much.

Tomorrow, is the today we feared yesterday.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2004-09-13 04:56 PM

Kirsty:

Growing bitter by the lack of direction

that line is priceless and you know?
No matter the age, sometimes you just
go right back to the beginning . . .
there are many days I feel as you do.
Hang in there . . .

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