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vampiana
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-09-09 02:00 AM



What do you want with me?
Am I a source of laughter?
An empty soul, worth a cheap chuckle or two?
As my back turns,
Do you double up?
What do you want with me?

Am I a foolish game to you?
See how long I'll pass go, collect my money
Before I crack.
How many times will I roll the dice?
Playing into your friendly grin.
Do you play me like a game of chess?
What do you want with me?

Am I the innocent girl to you?
The one who swallows any s***
Crying for more, savouring the taste
Blinded by illusions
That you might be genuine.
Do you mislead me?
What do you want with me?

I'm sick of missing you
I'm sick of the hollowness I feel without you
I'm sick of the trashy high you give me.
I can't go on like this.
Confused, Abused, Accelerating, Crashing.
Stop the games, the jokes, the lies.
Please confess the truth.
What do you want with me?

*im really gonna stop submitting so many poems lol, im getting addicted.*


"Cut myself on angel's hair and baby's breath"-Kurt Cobain

© Copyright 2004 Kirsty - All Rights Reserved
Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-09-09 02:44 AM


It is addictive. But you never seem to run out of your inspiration, your poems just keep on coming, each as great if not better as the last. I like the game theme in this one. Nice work.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-09-09 03:06 AM


wow

all ur poems are so brilliant

U never run of out inspiration, and they just keep on coming!
Yes it is very addictive but for me it takes so much to write one, but u are so natural you just write!

your poems tend to remind me of Morgan Rowlands lol! haha hunter...... (L)

LOR

say wat you will, say what you mean, but you could never offend cuz your dirty words come out clean

vampiana
Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere
3 posted 2004-09-10 04:25 PM


Morgan Rowlands? random... i haven't read a wicca book since last year when i read "seeker", which one is the next one in the series?? i can't find it anywhere...

Tomorrow, is the today we feared yesterday.

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